This is the first edit of my short film. I still need to include the candidate number / college number etc... at the beginning. However, there are many improvements that can be made to this.
The length of the film is possibly too long for the content, aka it needs shortening. Several scenes need re-cutting and shortening which will help this. These scenes include the corridor scene (where the camera shows the point of view of Jonny and Shannon). The opening - instead of having Shannon throughout then Jonny playing the guitar, I could use paralell editing which will decrease the length and also make my film seem more fast-paced.
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